In the scarred face of our dying world, no more will peace shall abide the rich and the poor because the line between the two is now gone and also the trust to each other. But their still some other who still cower underneath the dark for the fear of this great monstrosity.
Across them all bloody war was this dying woman who sat down thinking that nothing of great divinity would change the fate of her expiring life. Faceless ghost roam across the desert where this woman was resting, bloods running all around and all seems to be a clock work powered by a single fuel, money. Crying all her weep giving a chance of her life to make an eternal happiness, what’s worth living if all everything is no where to be seen and all are unknown and unfaithful.
An hour of final resting when a gun shot was fired and into the sky came a fearful scream of unknown reason, the roaming spirits stops, look, and panic and went running but all where put to an end when bloods of rain spurred from the sky and fill the dry desert with it’s foul smell and nightmare sight all is red and all is dead. The weaken woman started to regain all her lost energy and started running while searching for a good place to cower.
Left and Right all is raining, top and below all are dying no one is no more living and then came a dazzled child equipped with a wet red knife and cup full of blood.
Woman “Little child what are you planning to do with that?”
And the woman heard no reply seconds later the woman hears an eerie giggle coming from the face of the young boy, and with speed of lightning he points the knife and lunge toward the weaken woman. Feeling no more regret the fallen woman close her eyes and prays to God.
“Dear God I know that You’re still there and I know that You still can her my plead, after this willing death please grant me the paradise that I’m always dreaming, I became as faithful as I could but time changes me and turned me into something that I once hated, a none believer. Please forgive me of what I have done, please open the gates of heaven for me so that I could enter your kingdom, your promised land, and my paradise.”
And then she heard a flesh being torn and liquids spilled into the floor, the woman thought to her self and ask her self that if that is the feeling of being dead. But questioned why she didn’t felt any pain and finally she regain her guts and saw that she wasn’t the one who is stab, but it was someone else.
Woman “Who are you?”
And the man who was stab turn around and said something but without air and sound with his mouth.
Man “I’m just someone who loves you. I promise that I will sacrifice my self just for you.”
And then a strange light coming from the sky above and pour lightning of energy regeneration to the fallen woman and help her stand. On her feet she fled with fear from the battlefield and running away never alone for she can felt that an armor of pure protection is still with her in her heart, waiting for a danger to rose and save her again.
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1. Tenses ~/.~
I came to the park one evening to meet my love and have a dinner on a restaurant, I stand waiting for her, our meeting time is 10 PM but I came early to make our dinner special and very adoring.
2. WTF?
I wake up with a dextrose on my hand and to find my self inside a room of a hospital, looking around I saw my precious beloved crying and weeping, I want to ask her but my mouth is numb, I want to touch her but my hand was numb, I want to tell I her but I got nothing to say, I can no longer speak, I can no longer breath, because I am now a living spirit.
3. WHAT??
The clock tower struck its bell ten time but I can’t see my loved, where is she? Where is my heart? I can feel a knife piercing deeper inside my heart, but I know patience, and I still waited. 10:15 PM came and there I saw her, late but never impure, beautiful but always forever. I run to her to kiss her hand, and also escort her to our special place.
4. Soooo... he's comparing her?
“Thanks for the compliment, but all of this is only nothing compared to you..” I replied
5. ... So "Very Perfect" is higher than "Perfect"
"... very perfect..."
6. WTF? So now he's glad that there are "dead" living things around?
"... and glad to notice that there are no living things below..."
7. A trap door? So now it's a maze or rather a theater stage? It's those places that I know of that have trap doors
"trap door"
8. That doesn't make any sense... what does "last floor" stated in the story meant? An underground/basement floor or a top floor?
9. Am soo totally lost here...
"Almost crushing her to death, good thing I came fast to save her. But all the adrenaline that I push on through ended, she slips out of my back and she fell, and with no more power to keep on standing I lost my grip on the ladder I fall to the ground."
10. Wrong analogy... warm = cold, agonizing = comforting
"Her hands felt warm but her tears are deeply agonizing"
11. Don't forget about the grammar...
-- D
1. Tenses ~/.~
I came to the park one evening to meet my love and have a dinner on a restaurant, I stand waiting for her, our meeting time is 10 PM but I came early to make our dinner special and very adoring.
2. WTF?
I wake up with a dextrose on my hand and to find my self inside a room of a hospital, looking around I saw my precious beloved crying and weeping, I want to ask her but my mouth is numb, I want to touch her but my hand was numb, I want to tell I her but I got nothing to say, I can no longer speak, I can no longer breath, because I am now a living spirit.
3. WHAT??
The clock tower struck its bell ten time but I can’t see my loved, where is she? Where is my heart? I can feel a knife piercing deeper inside my heart, but I know patience, and I still waited. 10:15 PM came and there I saw her, late but never impure, beautiful but always forever. I run to her to kiss her hand, and also escort her to our special place.
4. Soooo... he's comparing her?
“Thanks for the compliment, but all of this is only nothing compared to you..” I replied
5. ... So "Very Perfect" is higher than "Perfect"
"... very perfect..."
6. WTF? So now he's glad that there are "dead" living things around?
"... and glad to notice that there are no living things below..."
7. A trap door? So now it's a maze or rather a theater stage? It's those places that I know of that have trap doors
"trap door"
8. That doesn't make any sense... what does "last floor" stated in the story meant? An underground/basement floor or a top floor?
9. Am soo totally lost here...
"Almost crushing her to death, good thing I came fast to save her. But all the adrenaline that I push on through ended, she slips out of my back and she fell, and with no more power to keep on standing I lost my grip on the ladder I fall to the ground."
10. Wrong analogy... warm = cold, agonizing = comforting
"Her hands felt warm but her tears are deeply agonizing"
11. Don't forget about the grammar...
-- D
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